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Darkly Dreaming Klar Nett's avatar

Alexander sounds insanely DANGEROUS. I always appreciate when other writers come up with these detailed descriptions of the men, very hot...

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

I tried to write Alex as someone I’d fall for myself. I suppose I’m already a little in love with him in my imagination. He’s the alpha I’d been craving, so I decided to create him on the page. Thank you so much for your kind words, you’ve encouraged me to publish the next chapter very soon.

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Darkly Dreaming Klar Nett's avatar

Don't give up on here. You commit to the sensual romance more than me which I think will pay dividends. I'm definitely invested. Alexander is more classically appealing than Jude (who's very much rough around the edges) BUT at the same time, I sense he has a darker side to him we are about to discover.

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Oh, you’re absolutely right. We’ve only just met the polished, sensual version of Alexander. His charm is a beautiful disguise. We’ll linger in that playful, intoxicating space a little longer… and then the cracks will start to show. What lies beneath is far more raw, dangerous, and entirely unknown. Especially to Caitríona.

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TwistTheStories's avatar

I felt like I could relate to her when she talks about outgrowing an old dream.

I’m not entirely sure I like Alexander yet.

I mean I like him cause I read chapter 8.

But chapter 2…he sounds like the guy I’m not supposed to like. 😂

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

For me Alex has that wicked, irresistible spark. (He’s the sort of alpha you promise yourself not to love, yet you end up utterly addicted) Thank you so much for your comments 🖤 I hope you’re enjoying the ride. Chapter 9 lands this Sunday!

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Alice M. Reed's avatar

Hold on a sec let me wipe off drool from my face, because gods that damned Alexander made me cross my legs. Just saying. So hot unbearably hot & dangerous… and I’m drooling again.

Honestly, I know I’ve said this before but so beautifully written. Captivating.

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

I absolutely adore your comments 🫶truly they make my day every single time. And I’m so sorry for replying so late. Life ran away with me for a moment, but I’m here now, soaking up every word you wrote with a ridiculous smile on my face.

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Lynne Solisse's avatar

Sooo good! My favorite line: "I nodded. But part of me drifted, slowly, guiltily, away."

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Thank you so much🖤✨

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AsukaHotaru's avatar

This was magnetic — the tension, the restraint, the way her thoughts start to fray around him. Alexander feels less like a man and more like gravity itself. And that final scene with Tom… quietly devastating. You captured that ache between danger and honesty so well~

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Thank you so much!! Hope you'll enjoy the next chapters too 🖤

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AsukaHotaru's avatar

Enjoy them, I will~!

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