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Racheal's avatar

this was incredible. i loved the male character. very intense writing

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Thank you so much 🤩🫶 and welcome to the club 🖤✨!!!!!

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The Pilot Room's avatar

You write incredibly!!!

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

You are the kindest thank you so so so much 🖤!!!

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The Pilot Room's avatar

You’re very welcome😌

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Lee Stackhouse's avatar

this was really good, i love the power play between them, she's good at pushing back, he's good at pushing forward anyway, they have a great dynamic, really keeps you glued to the story wanting to read more 🌶 🌶 🌶 🔥 🔥 🔥

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Lee thank you so much🖤 It makes me incredibly happy to hear that you felt that push and pull between them because that power play is exactly what I wanted to land ✨ and welcome to DRC🖤

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Lee Stackhouse's avatar

happy to be here and excited to read more

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

So happy to see you here 🖤🫶

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Jenade's avatar

Wow! This is quite something! Incredible writing!

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Thank you so much and welcome to DRC 🖤✨🫶

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Rainbow Roxy's avatar

Hey, great read as always, it makes me think what if Caitríona’s query function was more resilient to Alex’s input valadation?

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Thank you I love that question 🖤 You’re absolutely right to push on that tension, and yes we’ll get there. Caitríona’s resilience to Alex’s provocations is still forming and that evolution is very much part of what’s coming next ✨

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andrea mars's avatar

Girl, this is sizzling HOT! I’m gonna need to start from the beginning! And I’m subscribing! Would love to hear some of your thoughts on my pieces. And I’ve also been singing myself off with A x lol 🪐✨

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Oh my goodness, thank you!!! That makes me ridiculously happy. I really hope every chapter hits just as hard and keeps you hooked all the way through. And I would love to read your pieces 😍😍

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AsukaHotaru's avatar

i started this chapter like heehee steam and ended it like …oh. oh no. feelings have entered the chat.

alex out here acting like a menace, a king, a menace-king, and then drops two sentences on a card and suddenly i’m sitting on the floor holding my chest like i’ve been personally addressed. illegal behavior.

the flirt-fight-dress-war??? adorable chaos. therapy-as-foreplay?? unhinged. and then—BOOM—ghosts, sister, locked doors, the boy under the armor waving once before disappearing again. rude. extremely rude.

also the note. THE NOTE.

sir. you cannot just say “you undo me” and expect people to go about their day. absolutely not.

i am giggling, kicking my feet, and also emotionally compromised. thanks for that.

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

I was so excited about this chapter for exactly that reason, because we finally get to see another side of Alex, and those inconvenient, undeniable feelings beginning to show themselves. He tries so hard to keep the armour locked in place, but it is slipping now, and he knows it.

Thank you for this utterly excellent, heart melting comment. You have captured his menace king energy and his emotional undoing perfectly, and I adore you for it. You are the queen 🖤🫶

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AsukaHotaru's avatar

I’m bowing dramatically and also clutching my heart.

Menace energy achieved, emotional damage confirmed.

I adore you right back 🖤

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Oof! I think i need some fresh air negative degree air after this one! You took us on a ride this Sunday afternoon!!

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