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AsukaHotaru's avatar

This chapter was absolutely unhinged in the best way — brunch on the surface, emotional earthquakes underneath, and then that bathroom scene setting every smoke alarm in the building off. The tension, the pettiness, the possessiveness, the kiss-you-senseless-then-argue energy… it all moved so fast I felt like I needed a seatbelt. And the parents just sitting there sipping tea while chaos simmered in the hallway? Absolute art..!

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Thank you so much🖤 honestly every time a lovely reader tells me they felt the exact vibes I was trying to pour into a chapter, it feels like magic🤩 I wanted that brunch to look perfectly polite on the surface while everything underneath was ready to combust and I’m thrilled it landed for you!!

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Darkly Dreaming Klar Nett's avatar

Uh I forgot to add - the way you write the sexual tension and encounters between them is absolutely masterful, tasteful despite the visceral nature of the acts.

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I’m always chasing a very specific vibe between them, something charged and intimate and a bit raw so it means the world if you can actually feel it when you read <3333 I’m really grateful for your words 🖤 🫶

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Darkly Dreaming Klar Nett's avatar

"When he spoke it was quiet and homicidally polite." -> haha, loved that line! And I love that Alex is giving off a bit of psycho vibes here (though you know - I'm a deviant so might not correspond to what the general public want ;-) ). The little joke about "possessive melodrama" made me chuckle, too. Alex man, relax. You are being a bit OTT, the girl wants you BAD but you might just fuck it up with this level of want! But when you do... ekhm... you know where to find me ;-)

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Oh how I love your comments <33333 They’re a whole experience on their own. Alex would be thrilled to read these lines 🤩🤫 and I agree he is being totally OTT 🙊 but he fully intends to last 😂

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

Hii!! No unfortunately I don’t have someone yet :-(

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Sure!!

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I would love that😍😍 thank you so much 🙏🙏

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Dark Romance Club's avatar

What a lovely thing to say. I’m so glad you enjoyed it 🖤

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