Oh this is so my weakness — dark, moody London, a haunted woman, and a narrator who already sounds like they’re about to fall into something they can’t crawl out of. You write it all with such delicious restraint, like every sentence knows exactly how much to show and how much to keep in shadow.
That first line got me instantly — “don’t let it swallow you whole.” Honestly? Too late. I’m swallowed. The atmosphere is rich and cinematic — I could feel the chill of the tile floor, the bitterness of that scorched coffee, even Nounou’s little bark like a warning the story won’t listen to.
And Ella — oh, she’s giving major porcelain-doll-with-a-secret energy. The kind of character who looks like she might shatter, but you just know there’s steel humming underneath. The “Remember” line? Yeah, that one’s going to echo for a while. It’s eerie and intimate at the same time — like someone whispering through glass.
By the time I reached “Not above. Below,” I actually whispered “oh damn” out loud. It’s quiet horror done right — and it makes the romance angle feel even more dangerous.
The writing is sharp, sensual, and unsettling in all the best ways~!
Ahh, thank you for this. You’ve made my rainy London heart very happy🖤
You’ve caught the mood just right. That slow, creeping pull into something messy and irresistible. Ella is trickier than she looks. What she remembers and what she chooses to say are not always the same thing and that gap is where the trouble lives.
I’m so glad the first line pulled you under, and that the quiet horror is working for you. We are only just stepping into the dark.
I’m thrilled you’re reading along. Stay with me. It gets bolder, murkier, and a lot hotter.
This was such a joy to read — I love how you described Ella’s layers. That quiet pull into the dark is exactly what keeps me hooked. Can’t wait to see how it unfolds next!
This is so lovely to read. I’m over the moon that Chapter 8 hooked you. I haven’t published before, so your message means the world. Sleep well and I hope you love the rest of the story when you dive back in 🖤
Beautifully written, very atmospheric, a nice premise also with your protagonist being a therapist. Invites two fold curiosity - as to your story and that voyeuristic desire to overhear what people say in therapy. Nicely done. I'm intrigued.
Thank you so much, that means a lot! This project is really close to my heart, so I’m thrilled it resonated with you. And yes, there’s something irresistibly tempting about that space between confession and curiosity isn’t there? I’m so glad it’s intrigued you 🖤
I completely get that, I’m in the same situation too! Your chapters flow so beautifully though, they make it worth stealing a few extra minutes to read 🖤
The opening of this chapter is so well written. The kind that will instantly pull you in. London is the kind of place that's intoxicatingly sweet.
Then there's the main protagonist, that already from this chapter carries an air dark, sensual, even if yet not presented like that. But from her words she choose to describe her boyfriend - safe and patient - she sounds to me like someone who settled. Someone who yearns for more.
And then there's Ella. And she surely is... something. Like, I've got so many questions. But, this is it for now. I love your writing style and the voice that carries the characters on the page. I'm hooked.
What a story, it got me hooked right in the beginning and the story is so good to be true!!!! One of the best intro I’ve read in recent times. Kudos to you!!!
Of course thanks for these, I never delved into this type of literature @ bookstores until it found me here on Suboo’staku, now I see what all the rage is about! Excited for yours 😁 on chapter 2
Welcome to the club 🖤 and hank you so much! I’m thrilled you’re enjoying it. There’s so much more coming, and it only gets messier, and a little more delicious from here. I can’t wait to hear what you think as it unfolds.
Thank you so much! That means the world!! I always see the scenes playing out like film reels in my head so hearing it felt cinematic is honestly the best compliment you could give🖤
Oh this is so my weakness — dark, moody London, a haunted woman, and a narrator who already sounds like they’re about to fall into something they can’t crawl out of. You write it all with such delicious restraint, like every sentence knows exactly how much to show and how much to keep in shadow.
That first line got me instantly — “don’t let it swallow you whole.” Honestly? Too late. I’m swallowed. The atmosphere is rich and cinematic — I could feel the chill of the tile floor, the bitterness of that scorched coffee, even Nounou’s little bark like a warning the story won’t listen to.
And Ella — oh, she’s giving major porcelain-doll-with-a-secret energy. The kind of character who looks like she might shatter, but you just know there’s steel humming underneath. The “Remember” line? Yeah, that one’s going to echo for a while. It’s eerie and intimate at the same time — like someone whispering through glass.
By the time I reached “Not above. Below,” I actually whispered “oh damn” out loud. It’s quiet horror done right — and it makes the romance angle feel even more dangerous.
The writing is sharp, sensual, and unsettling in all the best ways~!
Ahh, thank you for this. You’ve made my rainy London heart very happy🖤
You’ve caught the mood just right. That slow, creeping pull into something messy and irresistible. Ella is trickier than she looks. What she remembers and what she chooses to say are not always the same thing and that gap is where the trouble lives.
I’m so glad the first line pulled you under, and that the quiet horror is working for you. We are only just stepping into the dark.
I’m thrilled you’re reading along. Stay with me. It gets bolder, murkier, and a lot hotter.
And have a great week filled with good romance 🖤
This was such a joy to read — I love how you described Ella’s layers. That quiet pull into the dark is exactly what keeps me hooked. Can’t wait to see how it unfolds next!
Thank you, that made me smile 🖤 thrilled to have you with me.
I came in on Chapter 8 and just had to start from the beginning. I could read this all in a day and I’m gonna try. After I get some sleep now.
You are a fantastic writer. Have you published before?
This is so lovely to read. I’m over the moon that Chapter 8 hooked you. I haven’t published before, so your message means the world. Sleep well and I hope you love the rest of the story when you dive back in 🖤
Thank you for sharing. Nice style!
Thank you🖤🙏
Beautifully written, very atmospheric, a nice premise also with your protagonist being a therapist. Invites two fold curiosity - as to your story and that voyeuristic desire to overhear what people say in therapy. Nicely done. I'm intrigued.
Thank you so much, that means a lot! This project is really close to my heart, so I’m thrilled it resonated with you. And yes, there’s something irresistibly tempting about that space between confession and curiosity isn’t there? I’m so glad it’s intrigued you 🖤
Trust me, I know how that feels. I intend to catch up on more of your content. Just bloody day job getting in the way hah.
I completely get that, I’m in the same situation too! Your chapters flow so beautifully though, they make it worth stealing a few extra minutes to read 🖤
I will try between the meetings. Sometimes during but boss clocks on if I don't pay attention to his rants 😅
Mine too! I’m so done with the day job!
The opening of this chapter is so well written. The kind that will instantly pull you in. London is the kind of place that's intoxicatingly sweet.
Then there's the main protagonist, that already from this chapter carries an air dark, sensual, even if yet not presented like that. But from her words she choose to describe her boyfriend - safe and patient - she sounds to me like someone who settled. Someone who yearns for more.
And then there's Ella. And she surely is... something. Like, I've got so many questions. But, this is it for now. I love your writing style and the voice that carries the characters on the page. I'm hooked.
OMG!!
What a story, it got me hooked right in the beginning and the story is so good to be true!!!! One of the best intro I’ve read in recent times. Kudos to you!!!
Thank you so so so much!!!! So happy to meet you 🖤 next chapter (even spicier) lands tomorrow morning!!
Will be waiting for it!!
Delicious writing. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters. Thanks
thank you so so much 🫶 and welcome to the club 🖤✨
This sounds conversations I have with myself 😂 great development!
😂😂 thank you so much, I hope you’ll enjoy the next chapters as well. There’s so much more to come 🖤
Of course thanks for these, I never delved into this type of literature @ bookstores until it found me here on Suboo’staku, now I see what all the rage is about! Excited for yours 😁 on chapter 2
i'm hooked...
Welcome to the club 🖤
Great read! Excited to read more...
Welcome to the club 🖤 and hank you so much! I’m thrilled you’re enjoying it. There’s so much more coming, and it only gets messier, and a little more delicious from here. I can’t wait to hear what you think as it unfolds.
i LOVE messy 😈
More to read. ✨ ✨
Your writing feels cinematic. 😌
I couldn’t stop reading.
Thank you so much! That means the world!! I always see the scenes playing out like film reels in my head so hearing it felt cinematic is honestly the best compliment you could give🖤
This was very vivid imagery that I greatly enjoyed!
That means a lot, thank you🖤 !
Excellent writing. I love your metaphors and similes—very fresh. Love where this is going…😏
Thank you so much 🖤
This is soooooo good! Well done! I can’t wait for the next chapter 🤍🥰
Thank you so much 🤍 chapter 9 lands sunday !!
You write brilliantly. This chapter left me in awe.
Thank you so much 🖤✨ can’t wait to publish chapter 9 🖤
Oh and London, hah! That’s where Terms of Engagement takes place, too.
I’ll definitely check it out then 🖤!!!